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As a boy will do when he is in love,
Wouldn't you laugh if you could see me now?
Gotten what I deserve I suppose,
For choosing my dream over you.
With angry spiteful noitons,
And red hot lust
For everything you periodically offer
With my melty heart pie,
You hit me
As a boy will do when he is in love
And misinterpreting this,
broken decrepit love
I left our land,
For a much less celestial shore
As a girl will do when she is broken hearted.
And when I come home,
My God-like perception of you
Will imperceptably alter
And the ways you love me will change
As love will do when a boy grows up

Does the wadded up paper ball or the bowling ball fall faster?

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