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This Mother’s Day I want to give you
the most beautiful flowers you’ve ever seen
and watch your eyes light up at the site of them.

I want to give you a hug
and reminisce about when I was young
and you were younger…

Like when you taught me how to tie
with the belt of your red robe
and when you taught me how to make biscuits…
and then how to cut off the bottoms.

Oh Mom, there is so much I want to tell you…
But this Mother’s Day you are in Heaven
and all I can do is think of you
and pray I’ll be with you again soon.


Your Daughter

May 1, 2009 DJCapps

~Donna J

Do not look back in anger, or forward in fear, but around in awareness. -James Thurber

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The following comments are for "Dear Mom,"
by DonnaJ

Straightforward, honest, heartfelt, and beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing.

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: August 29, 2009 )

Dear Mom
Sweet and sadly touching.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: August 30, 2009 )

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