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My collection, I JUST WANT MORE. Don't tell me
different, I JUST WANT MORE. Kill, steal, murder,
mutilate, commit any abomination, I JUST WANT MORE.
Send the soldiers into battle, to give me more.
I don't care, JUST GIVE, GIVE, GIVE, ME MORE. I
JUST WANT MORE.

MORE, MORE, MORE, I feel good then sad, because I
DON'T HAVE MORE. Then, I get depressed because
I DON'T HAVE MORE. Let me just have more. Give to
me, I don't care who you are, JUST GIVE ME MORE.
Nothing matters in life, but to have more. BUT,
then they say, " HE HAS MORE ".

My friends have more. We all talk about having more.
It is better than life and all of eternity, TO HAVE
MORE. Just MORE, MORE, MORE, in my life. I walk
and people say, " HE HAS MORE ". Yet, under there breath
there is a snicker. I don't care what they say.
MORE, MORE, MORE, that is all I care about in life.

You don't have more, "SAP". Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha, I have
more, they don't say, "Ha" to me, because I have
more. All my life, I have collected more. Now they
only say to me, "HE HAS MORE ". "THEY RESPECT ME",
bend on a knee, tip a hat, even say hello. They
say, "HE HAS MORE".

Then one day death and war came. They said, "he has more".
With a ton about his neck, unable to flee, { THE
ENEMY, WHO WANTED MORE }.

2/15/2005 POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES

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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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The following comments are for "MORE GOLD"
by poewhit

nah
i'm not sure if people really want more as much as they want challenge, and how does one challenge oneself if they've already succeeded in what society views as challenge, the obtaining of wealth and power? Where to go but up? Sometimes i wonder if God has to challenge itself by creating what is not infinite, given it is infinite to begin*...(*not as if time is relevent though)

anyway, that's irrelevant in itself. i just think this is a very simple and common psychoanalysis that the meek pin on the powerful; i don't believe the motivation is always more gold

( Posted by: ghostpoisonsturgeon [Member] On: August 25, 2009 )





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