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Like the birds
Free, careful
But reminiscent
of days gone by
hands shaping futures
Like the birds
Small, cautious
Each step could be our last
Arms carrrying the world
Like the birds' wings

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Does the wadded up paper ball or the bowling ball fall faster?


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The following comments are for "Cautious Birds"
by thesadpoet

Birds
love the imagery.

( Posted by: DonnaJ [Member] On: August 29, 2009 )





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