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Maybe it's me, maybe it's you
Maybe it's the secret crowds of two
Maybe it's time we realize
These crowds of two have parted ways

Well I'm still trying to
Hold on tight to the refused
Hidden ways and hidden lives
Have lead us here to realize, to realize

It's unthinkable
We're unsinkable
Maybe, baby
We're just critical
Unbelievable
Inconceivable
Maybe, baby
We're incapable

So let's drift away tonight
Let stars and moons collide
So let's drift apart tonight
Let crowds of two be denied

Well maybe it's me, but it was you
That gave me space but no breathing room
I tried so hard not to let you down
But without air I sank and drown

It's unthinkable
We're unsinkable
Maybe, baby
We're just critical
Unbelievable
Inconceivable
Maybe, baby
We're incapable

So let's drift away tonight
Let stars and moons collide
So let's drift apart tonight
Let crowds of two be denied
So let's drift away tonight
Broken things held tight
So let's drift on tonight
Crowds of two are now one, goodbye

I think, we should have been
More then just a memory
I think, we should have been
More then an empty picture frame
I think, we should have been
More then a distant memory
I think, we should have been
More then an empty picture

It's unthinkable
We're unsinkable
Maybe, baby
We're just critical
Unbelievable
Inconceivable
Maybe, baby
We're incapable

So let's drift away tonight
Let stars and moons collide
So let's drift apart tonight
Let crowds of two be denied
So let's drift away tonight
Broken things held tight
So let's drift on tonight
Crowds of two are now one, goodbye


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I don't you can see, I only use my superpowers for good...


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The following comments are for "Crowds of Two"
by lifeasweknowit

Crowds
Nice to read you again. I was hoping you would wade in on the Song Challenge.
This is wonderful. 'Crowds of two' is an unusual and catchy line. Fine structure verse to refrain. The refrain allows the for a sound and memory hook. using ...able words throughout. I noted the break in the opening verses. Am I seeing a musical break between verses opening up the time and creating more tension before the chorus? If so great idea.
Thanks for this. Good song!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: August 18, 2009 )





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