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Stayed up all night long.
Tomorrow will be painful.
Better take some pills.

Reverend Antinormalitā

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The following comments are for "OCD! LOL! ADHD! LMFAO!"
by TheTesticularPrancer

each of these bald facts harbours its own self-contained and circumscribed reality, enclosed and expressed by the full stop at the end of every line...

I recognise the distillation of such stock motion thinking from my own bouts of insomnia. Each step forward from cause to effect is slow, absolute, deliberate...

yes, great depiction of internal dysfunction in so few words.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 15, 2009 )

If representing/offering/posting as "haiku", I'd at least clip the caps and punctuation..

I represent 3/5/3, 5/7/5, 5/7/5/7/7 versions as being "senryupsyched poems", so as not to dishonor the genre..That's just me..


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: August 15, 2009 )

-? 5 ? 7 ? 5 ?-
Is that the way haiku/senryu is supposed to be written? Without caps or puncts? I don't even know. I'm not that well educated being from the Middle America and only attending college for two days. It would be a relief not having to worry about punctuation. Mrs. Watson's class was SO boring that year. I missed out on a lot because I was drifting off so much. Adverbs, predicates, where to put commas, semicolons, etc.
Then there was the trouble at home...
I welcome any criticism on punctuation and the like that anyone can give me. I need help in that area. Let me know. I am usually only pretending to be smart.

( Posted by: thetesticularprancer [Member] On: August 16, 2009 )

As little knowledge is..
dangerous, even more so is much.

Don't worry about it. Who gives a flying...

While we still have pseudo-freedom of expression, have at it.


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: August 16, 2009 ) too
This calls to mind a quote by one of my favorite authors,

'When I use a word,' Humpty Dumpty said in rather a scornful tone, 'it means just what I choose it to mean - neither more nor less.'
Lewis Carroll

Do it how you do it my friend, I liked it. I've been there more times than I care to mention, Kudos!

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: August 19, 2009 )

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