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he arrives in darkness
cloaked in shadows
he entices
I succumb

his eyes like embers
beckon me
drawing me
with dark promises
and untold pleasures

I shiver with delight
as he pulls me close
he nips my lip-
a taste of what's to come


my legs lock around him
his face buried in my neck
a hot stab of pain
my back arches
so close we're one
drifting in ecstasy

with my midnight sun

~~~dream as if you'll live as if you'll die today~~~

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The following comments are for "Midnight Sun"
by twistymisty

midnight romp
I had to read this a few times . It hits me differently every time - good writing that. Aside from the lubricious, okay - titillating :) last satnza, I found myself being drawn to read it as a naughty gothic vampire story. Although, I assume the tryst was in the far norh?

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: August 8, 2009 )

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