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Alone
surrounded by inky blackness
my heartbeat all I hear

confusion --> delusion


--FEAR--

Who AM I?
it rips
and tears
burns me up

something to nothing
nothing to something

a spark
it grows
it leaps
it dies
from the ashes

I AM I

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~~~dream as if you'll live forever...live as if you'll die today~~~


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