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Relieve me of this
I pray for unconsciousness
The small hours drift

Reverend Antinormalità

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The following comments are for "The Small Hours"
by TheTesticularPrancer

that they do
this reads as if muttered before segueing in to sleep. has a prayerful or incantatory quality too, intercession pleaded to the God’s of oblivion. nicely done

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 6, 2009 )

Muttering Before Sleep
Yes, that was exactly what it was. Muttered onto my laptop when I grew tired of tossing and turning. I wanted to sleep but the off switch was shorted-out in my head. Thank you for the compliment, Brother Guts.

You rule,
Reverend Antinomian

( Posted by: thetesticularprancer [Member] On: August 8, 2009 )

it is rare to find such
It truly is rare to find such well structured anguish. I love it, over and over again. I have enjoyed this and plan on sharing it with those I find company with. Thank you prancer!!

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: September 5, 2009 )

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