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You are afraid of success so why not digress
You are self-pity personified so why not be snide
You are so self-absorbed you qualify as a sponge
Why not just suck up the juice of abuse

You fight any force of eternal light and have only remorse
You sit outside the circle of life and reflexively enter into strife
You are a ball of isolation which increases your dark contemplation
Why not just suck up the juice of abuse

You resist all attempts of sanity by dint of doubt and vanity
You deny all divine intervention and by TV divert your attention
You move along an emotional tangent of shame. Itís ever the same
Why not just suck up the juice of abuse

You internalize pain and deadness and live your life in vain
You accessorize your wardrobe with a spear to launch into your fear
You dress your mind-frame with a voice of rejection and blame
Why not just suck up the juice of abuse

Stephanie Millican

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The following comments are for "The Juice of Abuse"
by echomarm

Tell it like it is Sister! Good job. Love the counerpoint in each line. More, since a few lines pertain to me, but I will forgo the abuse part.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: July 21, 2009 )

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