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Untamed Passion Pummels the Soul...
When Love Becomes a Panther

� G.Dean Stevens

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The following comments are for "Untamed Passion"
by awhippingflame

Untamed Passion
Nice word choice here. I ready like all the "P" words, because it give the poem a dramatic feeling leading up to the mysterious wild black panther. I feel that you have a lot of untapped creativity, energy and imagination, inside of you. Keep telling us stories. Let those words flow out of you, more. Nice stuff.


( Posted by: FireFly747 [Member] On: June 18, 2011 )

So you like my play on "P" words. I should tell you that it's all part of a Perfect Plan

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 19, 2011 )

That's Nasty. In a really, really good way! Fire, in every sense of the word.

( Posted by: MuddyBraun [Member] On: July 7, 2011 )

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