The following comments are for "Untamed Passion" by awhippingflame
Nice word choice here. I ready like all the "P" words, because it give the poem a dramatic feeling leading up to the mysterious wild black panther. I feel that you have a lot of untapped creativity, energy and imagination, inside of you. Keep telling us stories. Let those words flow out of you, more. Nice stuff.
Posted by: FireFly747 [Member] On: June 18, 2011
So you like my play on "P" words. I should tell you that it's all part of a Perfect Plan