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for Chrystal,
I hope all of your dreams, come true.

-hold what can not be yours
cherish thoughts you keep of this
for one day to be opened
and all of it is gone the memory lives
half hold the candle light
for it's breath to be free in your palm
carress the nearness you feel
a unique love only you have felt
a kind of Godly gift
that seathed through
to your attention so long ago
someday gone into waves of silence
yet always to be remembered
in your heart.

-David T. Culver

David T. Culver

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