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Please help me
Help you
Stop the machine

Breath
Live
Realize virtual reality

Is a myth

Iím living in a world
Where the brain is a hard drive
And the heart a power strip

Feelings are uncontrollable
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communication is only text

What has become of our minds?
Where have the souls of our generation gone?

When did I stop becoming a machine?
Why can't I stop the machine in them?

Please help me
Help you
Stop the machine

Breath
Live
Realize virtual reality

Is a myth




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