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Down for down
I counted the days
Town for town
I followed their ways
I broke the ice
I rolled the dice
I asked for inspiration
I prowled on their nation
And what did I find?
A new future for the human kind.
They bonded words they broke the beat,
they made a life from their ruined streets.
An anglo searching for the ultimate cure,
a writer dying, looking for something more.
Bring me the journey that I will defeat,
and hear the sounds of the ultimate beat.


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