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Happy Anniversary, my bride;
I feared perhaps our last.
Forgiving yet not forgetting,
learning from the past.

I want to be the man you married
or better yet
the one you thought you did.

Twenty four and many more,
Connie, I love you,
my cherie amour.


s06.29.09

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"A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds, adored by little statesman and philosophers and divines. With consistency a great soul has simply nothing to do."

- Ralph 'Where's Waldo' Emerson




"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like. And I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."
- Bilbo Baggins













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by drsoos

Soos
What a guy! Happy Anniversary to you and your bride...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: June 30, 2009 )





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