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Watching, waiting
for nothing at all.

Temptation distracting
from nothing at all.

Epiphany and perception,
to this forest are but ignorant trees.

'Tween them, treading lightly
still spreads this nothing disease.

As tracks alongside yours
only hurt more than please.

Stumble on past absurdity.
Amble through with futility.
Unattainable through immortality.
So pointless and to the quick-
nothing at all.

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