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--You look and know--

Blank eyed they walked in.
Just a minute, and
out back door I went.
Didn't care what offered
when you look and
there's no soul
it's time to get away.
You know it
doesn't matter who they are
or why they came.
But hope that no one
catches on
or you'll get grabbed

By: David E. Howerton

Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game

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The following comments are for "You look and know"
by bhagwandave

You look and know..
WOW.. If I had to guess this is much more than walk in a place and if you happen to see "one or more of them" the hair stands up on the back of your neck and you know positively that no one else notices........

And the next time you look...they're gone. You know, they had to pass you, in order to walk out of the door...but they didn't....

If this is too heavy for your poetry...sorry about that....sorry that it also does happen...
Thanks...glad I found your writings...They are excellent....

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: January 1, 2011 )

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