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--You sometimes wonder--

On the chair by this bed
all those folded towels
with bits of lint
dropping to floor.
At least I put the big ones
on bottom this time.
And on top
books I plan on reading
this week.
Better than being stuck
watching gnats & moths
beat at the dim lamp
by this bed.

By: David E. Howerton

Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game

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The following comments are for "You sometimes wonder"
by bhagwandave

You Sometimes Wonder..Indeed
Good Lord....I thought you were talking about my room!

Those large folded towels on the bottom sitting neatly on the chair and Ivors book abandoned for the DVD player........

If you intend on writing a novel, I want to know about it....Thanks

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: January 1, 2011 )

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