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Beneath a candle\'s anarchy i became
the prey of a whales primal song,
the chanting menacing bird\'s leviathan.
The moon held a mutiny filtered through
my souls astronomy,the earth slipped from
carbon fingertip\'s,i bit a wolf who slipped
into a reverie and emerged a hybrid walking through
ice deserts and hid his true form, he wrote a parable
with desert storms.Fire and ice were tattooed in
my eyes i magnified a secret sun burning underground
that swallowed the earth,death was cooled in heaven\'s
birthing pool\'s.In a corridor between two burning star\'s
Jerusalem\'s trembling cross was uncreated.

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whoever you are come forth these are the days that must happen to you.


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