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Iir:
so where to now?

Andzer:
first we have follow the star of the loud tip,
until we reach the well of the morrow...

Iir:
so we are headed to the well of the morrow...

...

Iir:
Andzer?

Andzer:
Yeah?

Iir:
did you met Arvis?

Andzer:
yeah, kinda little loose around the edges and totally lacking of sanity,
i like the guy.

Iir:
so?

Andzer:
so what?

Iir:
why didn't you do anything?

Andzer:
There was nothing i could do

Iir:
by the way,
what will we find in the preparations place?

Andzer:
Mostly cartoons and dasstardly jokes,
don't think there is much left of the place by now,
but his resting place is somewhere around there

Iir:
Good, i am pretty good at tracking down

Andzer:
look, there, there...
for christ sake let me not catch you smiling...
you don't do that often right?

Iir:
what often?

Andzer:
Smile

Iir:
Get out of here...

...

the star showed the way into the well of the morrow,
where only sacrilege jokes and bad drawings were found.

Iir:
Interesting

Andzer:
Interesting!!!
what the hell!!!

Iir:
i mean the guy was moody

Andzer:
What? i am not catching your drift

Iir:
i mean this were his last representations of things,
and by the look of this to find the column of Arvis,
we will only have to follow the scent of peacefullness or death,
maybe peacefullness and death but heck, who knows?

Andzer:
and that is your answer?
i think we should divide the whole thing into areas and...

Iir:
Shut up.

Andzer:
What!?

Iir:
I said shut up

Andzer:
Go to hell!!!!!!

Iir:
Again?
what a nack,
but we just came from there

Andzer:
Before i give in to my murdering rage,
lets have it your way...


...

the path was lit by the shinning moonlight,
and the destination was getting closer,
the air became light,
the ground was radiating,
and the sounds of the creeking trees,
a ballad for our characters.

iir:
everything smells awfully peaceful in here,
so peaceful is almost disgusting.

Andzer:
there you go again Iir,
you know, for a madman you have more than your share of grudges against things.

iir:
otherwise life would not be fun

Andzer:
that is your answer to everything,
and what is it with you and war?

iir:
it is not war itself,
it is what war brings,
and i don't mean suffering and pain,
i mean chaos and mass destruction,
final destination extinction

Andzer:
huh?

iir:
you do understand? do you?

Andzer:
Sure dude,
and what about your thing with happiness?

iir:
hey, i have nothing personal against it,
i just say it hates me

Andzer:
What?

iir:
huh?

Andzer:
that is then that...
well you know what i mean?

iir:
No.

Andzer:
doesn't matter, let's move on,
and what about god?
what do you think about god?

iir:
don't even get me started.

Andzer:
Uhhh, touched a spot there huh?

Iir:
are you trying to get anywhere with this?

Andzer:
you talked to me

Iir:
i give up.


then silence covered the sorrounding and a mild scent of lime was
inpregnated to everything; the grass under their feet swifted with
the wind revealing a construction in the ground,

Iir:
inscripted circles,
living tissue edges?
flow disruption locks!!
what is this?

Andzer:
Holy jesus, freaking unbelievable,
it is the column of Arvis.

Iir:
i imagined it above ground,
seems it is below ground,

Andzer:
Arvis was an exceptional guy

Iir:
Is

Andzer:
Pardon?

Iir:
Arvis is an exceptional guy,
or at least you think so,

Andzer:
why would you say that?

Iir:
According to my schedule,
it says that Arvis has been living for the last few days.

...

Arvis:
Just look what the wind brought,
if it is not Adan Naught Iir Corr,
and Plais Andzer Stow Rerred,
i was waiting for you.

------
from all that was,
to all, that is,
the end


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