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Beauty in my dream II

Always look at her 'cat-eyes'
Where my passion lies.
She detected that, saying it point-blank
To my shadow,
My shadow never denied the natural feeling
And the fact that her beauty from sole
To crown has caged my awareness.
Not even her caring and welcoming smile
That have bribed its way into my sub-conscious
Like my daily law books.

If i were a militant, i would have kidnapped
Her just for a day where no distraction
To interfere with our chat, with door shut,
No glance at the sun through the window.
What are we going to do?, she screamed.
I leave that to circumstances of the event.

Though love to be by my side,
yet denied having an atom of love for me.
It is clear, even clearer than 7up,
That all day long she will forever be
A new specie of beauty with invincible
Trace in my life while she keeps suspence
At my doorstep.


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