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The sun is setting slowly
The moon is rising high
Trapped between the two of them
Is a deep and primal cry

The shadows of the evening
Move as dreams upon my skin
Bathed in silver moon light
Translucent paper-thin

The part that I am playing
Is lost among the light
The moon in all its splendor
Calls me to the night

I feel your hand upon me
As you reach to touch my face
Yet in the liquid darkness
Tears are all I taste

The shadows dance around me
As fire distorts the flame
To leave me with the longing
To brand me with your name

The moon is high and golden
The sun had died away
Somewhere in the middle
Iím trapped
So here I stay

Youíre there with in the shadows
Dancing in the light
The mist that walks around you
Turns from day to night

I struggle to be with you
To be a part of one
To taste the golden moon light
To walk with in the sun

Yet in the silent shadows
You refuse to see
How life without you in it
Keeps me trapped somewhere between

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