Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search

Average Rating

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

One day you appeared in my life, like it was meant to be, blissfully we'd lay and listen to eachothers voices 'til we fell asleep. Stupidly I threw it all away with one big mistake and I paid the price by loosing you.

Time passed and life was just life. You found me again and second go around, I thought it was love I had found. You left me hanging without a good bye, nor a good reason as to why? "Too much shit going on," you said. What shit? " What if I end up dead?" you ask. "I'd rather have gotten to know you more and been with you for as long as I can," I said. You didn't want me getting hurt, but it was to late, the love I had found was taken away.

Stable again, making progress, I am doing well. You show up on my doop step. WHAT THE HELL!?!? I was angry, but whatever, right? Your "sister" got us to talk and everything was forgot. We're happily back together again, I dropped practicly everything for you, MY BAD. I was trying soo hard and then you left again. Now you've changed soo much. I can't even say I know you anymore, all I can say is I use to know who you were. In the end I realize I was too foolish to recognize our relationship was all one BIG LOST CAUSE.


Related Items


The following comments are for "Lost Cause"
by DeMoNiCcHiLd

Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.