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Peace is a traitor. A comfortable fiend.
Shy, quiet failure disguised as a virtue.
Dreams filled with poison that tastes of vanilla.

I am the model for normative philters:
the ideal amalgam of watered-down meaning.
Cool, clotted ash in a Bakelite bowl.

Aim the doomed at my image. I'll try to absorb them.
While wishing, again, for a cure for the cure.

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I blog irregularly at TinkerX. I'm also on Twitter. @andyhavens, go figure.


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The following comments are for "A well behaved death"
by andyhavens

Andy's Ahhh-ha....
;-)


Blessings to you and yours, Andy!

With ALL love,

Karma Karma Karma Leeee-na la la la la la la la
la-la la la da da dada....



( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: May 18, 2009 )





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