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deception's angel
of own ghost
here and now
breathing without air
past-reaching
mylar-voiced

no reason for rhyme
beyond chance
left withered
reflecting core self
back-imaged
host taken


5.16-17.09
for eyes

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below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011






























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The following comments are for "retrogradus ab processus"
by Bobby7L

retrogradus ab processus
Bobby, this is absolutely beautiful!

( Posted by: walrus [Member] On: May 18, 2009 )

Kelly sees..
Kelly,
Welcome to Lit.

Grazie,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 18, 2009 )





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