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In a field of sunlit daisies
feeling cozy, comfortable and lazy;
I reached up to the blue-bright sky
pulling down a fluffy cloud passing by.
On the cloud I laid my head
settling into my golden bed.

Here I lay under heavens grace,
taking my last breath and turning my face.
Before I floated away from where I slept,
my body to the earth is kept.

Now beyond my soul is free,
life on earth is no more for me.
Here in this world of glory
is the best part of my story.
My life continues, it does exist,
the love of life I cannot resist.
For I am born and born again,
to carry out the destiny of women and men.

By Gale.

Jayne Gale

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The following comments are for "DESTINY"
by Gale

WOW!... too speechless to say anything else!

( Posted by: Kinana [Member] On: May 13, 2009 )

Thank you for the 'Wow', a great compliment. Gale.

( Posted by: Gale [Member] On: May 14, 2009 )

on destiny
Adroit! This one rolled around in my head sweetly, and comforting. Very nicely done. A healing treat!
Thank you!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: May 23, 2009 )

Thank you for your generous comments, Gale.

( Posted by: Gale [Member] On: May 24, 2009 )

after all this...
if only more of us could write about what happens after all this...

Thanks for making it sound so irresistible.

( Posted by: Tamir [Member] On: June 1, 2009 )

You are very welcome Tamir. Gale (Smile)

( Posted by: Gale [Member] On: June 1, 2009 )

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