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It has been two months
Two long months
Where did time go
and why weren't you there
Two months without your face
I found it no where
As I inhale your brand of ciggarettes
Which have become my own special brand
I mourn every morning
for my peace sign
For my laugh
For my grumpy love
It has been two months
Two long months
Which I imagine will stretch
Into long years
Without your love and ciggarettes
But the memories remain

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Two months without my best friend

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Does the wadded up paper ball or the bowling ball fall faster?


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