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you were an
abomination from

if nightmares are the
product of a disturbed mind
then you are mine

if pictures are worth
a thousand words
then i curse your name

I spit when i
see your image
and wretch at the
thought of you

a plague is
what you are

spreading your
disease across

end time
end time
end time

He who is unable to live in society, or has no need because he is sufficient for himself, must be either a beast or a god -Aristotle

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by thebeast

The writing is disturbing but everyone has their own thing. It is very creative and it's welll written. It's good but keep on going you are going to be good.

( Posted by: louiemary [Member] On: April 29, 2009 )

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