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Fear creates feelings of coldness
even in the nights with the hottest weather.
Worse than that,
everything still burns inside.

My mind is idle , I just can't go on
or concentrate when I'm involved in any
I can't think anymore , yet my mind is busy!
It's full of wandering ,restless, fearful,and lost ,thougths and questions
They just lie in wait. They could't lie to rest


Waiting for the dawn to come
to clear all the fears
waiting for the sun to rise
and dry out endless tears

The sweet is never as sweet without the sour, and I know the sour which allows me to appreciate the sweet.

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The following comments are for "Ironic paradoxes ..What a pity..isn't it"
by fairgrace

I liked this but I felt as if I wantwed more. This is such a great area - deep musings and insight possible - you are a terrific writer.

LIked this:
'It's full of wandering ,restless, fearful,and lost ,thougths and questions
They just lie in wait. They could't lie to rest'

I know the feeling well. But aren't our busy minds what drives we poor scribes to write?
Thank you.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: April 17, 2009 )

I was just thinking of you last night..Amazing..
..a pleasure finding your voice again.

Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: April 17, 2009 )

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