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Listening silently to liars loudly
overemphasizing assumptions with
orthodoxies unremitting...
Now is the Age of Incessancy!

Speaking of ceaselessness, this
criminally negligent FECES flung frequently
reeks of sophomania in its foulest form
aggravating the anxieties of a paranoid species.

Nowadays, they say this redundancy ruins all potency,
encourages complacency, scourges proficiency, and
soothes us softly to slumber like
general anesthesia administered via the Tube.

Engraved in our DNA is an inherent,
elemental sense of ever-present VIRTUOUSNESS!
So plug your bunny ears! Hop fast from CONJECTURE!
Eventually, we can cancel this cancerous culture
!




------
Reverend AntinormalitÓ


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The following comments are for "Loons, Cranes, Geese!"
by TheTesticularPrancer

loons and goons
My God man, what are you doing? What will become of the world if everyone did what you are doing? Telling the truth here and telling the truth there - Jeez it will all be chaos and ruin. The world is comfortably built on carefully constructed lies. If people like you start willy-nilly just going around writing and speaking the truth it will all come crashing down. Dear God, do you want that? What of all the PhDs and the Polticians and the CEOs and the heads of Churches and the Oil Companies and the AMA and NASA and the UN and the Universities and the - and the -

Never mind! I liked it! ;)

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: April 16, 2009 )

@ thetesticularprancer
I'm amazed! You stopped prancing around those testicles long enough to do some writing.

Fabulously funny piece! I'm giving it a ten for no other reason than it made me laugh.

Ochani

( Posted by: OchaniLele [Member] On: April 17, 2009 )

HOWL...
Woooooooooooooooooooo! Ha-ha!

Tashi delek;-)

Karma

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: April 17, 2009 )

Well said Rev!
Why don't you say what you REALLY mean Reverend!

This is hilairious...a thinking man's Will Rogers!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: April 18, 2009 )

Speaks to me
Thanks

( Posted by: Tamir [Member] On: April 26, 2009 )

شُكْر، إمتِنا
Thanks to all of you for your great comments. Funny as hell for a baloney piece of work such as this. How about some critiques? I love the premise but hate the meter, rhythm, flow and the lack there of. It is, however, very nice to come back and see so many positive comments. I like you guys.

( Posted by: TheTesticularPrancer [Member] On: May 24, 2009 )

1001011101011
As a former robot who's hard drive exploded, I found I could not afford do buy one of those sleek new drives that makes the deceptions and rationalization go down smoothly. My enlightenment is the result of cheap equipment.

I see you try so hard to use your thesaurus.

( Posted by: RHJesus [Member] On: July 24, 2009 )

Yes, Jesus
I am happy for your explosion. May you continue to burn with the rest of us into ultimate luminosity. I'm still not happy with this one. This terribly overwrought acrostic of mine. It disgusts me. But I had to try. It was rattling inside my head so loud.

( Posted by: TheTesticularPrancer [Member] On: July 27, 2009 )





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