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--It's worth going--

Going through
brief dark
frost on eye brows
first time Martian pyramids.


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Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game
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The following comments are for "It's worth going"
by bhagwandave

@bhagwandav
I'm just going to say it, but say it with all love: It's a nice poem, but I don't get it!

Which, if you knew me, wouldn't be surprising. There are a lot of things I just don't get, especially when it comes to poetry! Anyone on this site who knows me personally will tell you I'm a bonafide airhead!

Would you mind explaining this poem, what it means, and why you wrote it? It almost seems like a piece in favor of space exploration . . . but I'm just not sure.

Ochani

( Posted by: OchaniLele [Member] On: April 17, 2009 )

worth doing
You are a space/science geeky poet and I love it. I am such a sci-fi/wierd fan this this one tickled me. Cold day on Mars and I just know there are pyramids on Mars - maybe even on the dark side of the moon. Won't the world be in shock?
Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: April 17, 2009 )

Cool
Dave-
A highly pleasurable experience..

Psychologisticked,
Bobby7L

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: April 17, 2009 )





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