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The feelings of sadness when horse appear
Reminiscing the past when he was still here
The wind blowing through me I feel free
With his arms around me safety it will be

Branches of trees hitting against each other
While birds were chirping flying all together
Feeling so warm as the sun shines through
Missing him so much, now what am I to do?

Grandpa who I love that I miss a lot
Vanished from the world, never knew where his at
Buckets of tears from the pain I feel
How will it heal when it feels so unreal?

Things may not be the same as it was before
But memories will remain stronger even more


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