Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search

Average Rating

(0 votes)

You must login to vote


A nightingale came to my window
Letting our a sonorous rhapsody
Again and again he visited
I ignored, keeping a chaste distance
Again and again he repeatedly persisted
His serenade alluring, penetrating my love chamber
In futility shaking of its kindred hold
With might within and without.
I adjusted my blind, like my sister on the garden
The dike is now broken, the river overpowers
The alluvial peace, mind, unven surface undulating steps.
The nightingale sings
Soul and body in too good to heal.
Captive, I invited the household.
As I stretched the dirt was shot
The nightingale flew never to return
Living a continuous melody in my heart


Related Items


The following comments are for "THE NIGHTINGLE"
by chijiokeosumuo

Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.