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~.::.♥.::.because I love you.::.♥.::.~

to my friend


One day
The dream of your life will be real
And only then you'll tell me how you feel

A different feeling...a different dream
A happy, victorious, one that will redeem
Your smile, your face and your precious heart

Your most transcending soul
That sees the far goal

One day Your world will be filled with joy
With sadness...coz you'll no longer remember this troy

You have more than you think
You can color lives...you colored mine in pink
Just don't give up on dreaming

I'll always be there when you smile
And never depart you when you're fragile

Just promise me
You'll always be strong
Coz only then you'll pass what is wrong
And only then...I'll be strong too
because I love you

------
To err is human, To forgive is divine


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The following comments are for "Because I love you"
by Obsession

@ Obsession
I'm only commenting here . . . because I love . . . your poetry!

Ochani

( Posted by: OchaniLele [Member] On: April 7, 2009 )

n__m
That is nice of you to encourage me to write! all those poems in here are old >_

( Posted by: Obsession [Member] On: April 7, 2009 )





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