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10OchaniLele

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Give it up
Give me somthing good
Like sex
Only a little more glib
With a lot less glam

Give it up
Give me weird preoccupations
Like weird sex habits
Only a little more glitter
With a lot less mundane

Give it up
Give me something new
Like new sex positions
With a lot more salsa
And a lot less spice

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Does the wadded up paper ball or the bowling ball fall faster?


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The following comments are for "Give it up"
by thesadpoet

@ thesadpoet
Okay -- this is hot! Truly.

But for some reason, in my head it seems like the start of a song, and not a poem.

Ochani

( Posted by: OchaniLele [Member] On: April 6, 2009 )





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