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It's been a year now
without you around
and I still can't get around it
in my mind, I'd be lying if
I said I've forgotten you
but as time goes by
and it always will
I wondoeer if our paths
will ever cross again
and if the do
will I stop seeing
your face on every girl
on the train
this time I know
we can be
a part of this
instead of apart like that

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by Tylendal

lost loves
It's amazing how a lost love can appear on the face of strangers that we meet. Such is the curse of love. Excellent, I loved this one and hope to see more from you.

( Posted by: thebeast [Member] On: April 14, 2009 )

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