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It's like a stream
and I can't get back
up to the place
where I fell apart
Talking Talking Talking to me
when I don't know what to say
Time's gonna fly
when you walk on by
Time ticks slower
like a stream
that I can't get back
Something's happened
and we're not quite sure
but if it goes over
we'll be on the floor
Shakin' like stream
and we can't come back
into the empty hours spent

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