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This is what you wanted
You're finally gonna get it
In the mail today
I cant say when I found out but then
Neither can you
I keep telling but you just don't listen
Out of paper & time just tapers away
I'll keep her safe for now
Play something that I know
Take it out then put it away
Hope you understand someday
Why it has to be this way
And I'm gone again.....

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