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the rags pop
just listen
to
the
crazy rhythm of
the
shoeshine beat
yeah
pop, pop, pop
goes the
sound of
the
shoeshine bebop


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The following comments are for "Shoeshine Bebop"
by FireFly747

Bebop
Liked the imagery and word floe but count was off.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: February 18, 2010 )





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