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I'm never gonna
hit you again baby
just give me
one more chance
I can change
I hope you know it

I didn't mean to hurt you
please don't leave me
don't go to someone else
nobody can give you
the lovin' I give

oh baby please
please come here
please baby
yes I will be so nice
just a little closer
that's right baby
come to daddy

you dirty bitch
I'm gonna give it to you
good now



Peter Buknatski
Montpelier, Vt.


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Peter Buknatski


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The following comments are for "America Changes (NOT)"
by PeteySweety

poewhit
It really takes two to tango. If she didn't learn from before, she must like the abuse.

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: April 4, 2009 )

abuse
Well, in this case I'm talking about America as the batterer (analogy)--other peoples don't want our abuse, we just keep dishing it out, and there's no escape from us, much the same as it is for women 'trapped' by a system that supports the abuser more than the victim.

( Posted by: PeteySweety [Member] On: April 6, 2009 )





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