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My brother-in-law has a cat
His name is Marma and he isn’t a brat
Au contraire he heads for my lap
A love sponge he becomes before taking a nap

My friendly neighbor has a dog
Her dog’s name is Buffy, but she doesn’t jog
On the contrary she prefers a tummy rub
To anything like exercise in a health club

I have a new friend who likes to knit
Her name is Carol and she’s really a hit
Her loving fingers create scarves for sobriety
Which she gives to those who attend our society

My neighborhood church has a lady in it
She’s elder, tall and her name is Kit
Her mission is to serve those whose needs aren’t slight
Her gracious giving is really out of sight

My husband likes to work and to save
He’s no spring chicken but at home he’s a slave
His goal in life is to get it all done
Without spending a dime until the battle is won

Stephanie Millican

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