Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search

Average Rating

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

If happiness was given to you in a golden tray
And sadness was taken away

Then boredom and morbidity shall be your life
For sadness and melancholy are spices that are rife

It is too dark to live in black
But way too darker if happiness only was your track

Be balanced, be grey
Be flexible, just like clay

Nor solid, nor fluid

To err is human, To forgive is divine

Related Items


The following comments are for " Life "
by Obsession

Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.