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Who will wipe off my tears
My world wont ease

My heart is shattered
Every piece blames the other
Reconciliation is not an option even if flattered

I'm dry, I'm thirsty and there is no enough dew
To soften my pieces
I need a pain killer

The sharp edges of my pieces are cutting deeply
It hurts every time I breathe
In order to end my pain
And start all over again
I must end my old shadow
And have a hope that there will be a rain

To plant a new heart, and raise it within
To teach it the painful old lessons
And make it ready to begin

Strong, emotionless, empty every day
And to keep it far from love's way


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To err is human, To forgive is divine


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