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t-i-m-e
what does it mean?
can counting ticks
forbid the obscene?

an illusion:
of knowledge and precision
as if knowing
may stop the acquisition


a small muscle had just kept the pulse
for days after the actual time
open your eyes my very dear one
even for once before you climbed




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