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Bodies, stop-motion
At rest in locomotion
Miss their station stop

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Beware the lollipop of mediocrity-
Lick it once and you suck forever.


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The following comments are for "reMTA"
by metrozol

poewhit
In a world of 9 billion or so people, all can;t be the cherry on top of the ice cream. So, I guess there are many of us suckers around. [ and that's true ] BOUGHT A PET ROCK LATELY ??????????????

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: March 10, 2009 )





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