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A jaguar! A fine machine!
Born of British Engineering
from the innovative minds in the United Kingdom
Though your engine is Ford now
We know the Union Jack still flies in your heart.

A jaguar! The very name sings
of overprices luxury!
Are your leather seats, chrome bumpers
and namesake hood ornament
really worth the cost?

A jaguar! Transporting members
of an elite caste to exclusive
members-only country clubs
nationwide.

Overdone.
Overpriced.
Over here.


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The following comments are for "A poem about a jaguar, take 1"
by Eldros

An ordinary Jaguar?
My dream car: An emerald-green Jaguar S-Type. No elite castes for me, though; I will drive it among the people, the mob, the crowd, the mass (as Carl Sandburg would put it).

I enjoyed your poem; you should write more satire.

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: March 4, 2009 )

Thanks ArsPoet
ArsPoet,

Glad you enjoyed the poem. Admittedly, I felt awkward about writing it because I usually don't write satire...I'm usually too concerned with becoming cynical or cruelly mocking.

( Posted by: Eldros [Member] On: March 13, 2009 )





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