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Standing tall and true
Aglow with golden honeyed halos
A chorus of sunflowers gently sways

Singing mutely with the voices of angels
To the silent applause of an audience unseen

Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hallelujah!


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The following comments are for "Sunflowers"
by Eldros

flowers
flowers the closet you get to god in this life i believe

( Posted by: Zeus [Member] On: March 6, 2009 )

Thanks
Zeus: Thank you for your comment. I agree; flowers seem to be a pretty pure manifestation of divine beauty.

Jonpenny: Thank you for the rating.

- Eldros

( Posted by: Eldros [Member] On: March 13, 2009 )





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