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Seahorses riding on wings of gold
White ships carrying precious holds
snowy white doves and rhythmic voices
Mermaids who sing and mermaids rejoicing
See the horses ride with the waves
dashing and crashing into the caves
and then with a roar the waves immerse
the caves and then they just disperse.


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by Morganth

great flow
I don't know how crazy I am about seahorses, but that's a fine piece of writing. Very natural rhythm, very fun to read.

( Posted by: evil_bacteria [Member] On: October 7, 2003 )





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