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***also written years ago, 5/10/04, but the title is new***

when i kiss you-
lips curling swift
but so long lasting-
the whole sky falls down,
the foundations of the city collapse,
the world becomes a jungle
younger, healthier.

when you touch me-
fingers caressing, then unrelentless
one moment followed by a thousand-
my inhibitions shatter.
there is nothing else.
the world belongs to us and
i want to bury you
in the reckage of my kiss.

every moment, every hour-
before we kissed-
i spent with my heart
delicately, obviously
on my sleeve.
i wondered if you wouldn't be here.
until- feeling your hands
in my hair and then you
touching me.
everymoment was hell
beautiful, seductive, secret.

when in your embrace
all these emotions-
chaos, youth, liberation, exhileration, beauty, seduction and
hell-
pass through me and

everything is conquerable.




------
someday could be today...





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