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On the prowl, a massive
orange and black cat
Rippling with energy

Sleek, smooth, muscles relaxed
Eyes gleaming
And charged with intention

White fangs, velvet paws
Soft wiskers, sharp claws

Though his tail's lashing back and forth now
He'll be curled up and purring soon enough

After he gets what he wants...


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The following comments are for "One Angry Tiger"
by Eldros

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Dagger: Thank you! Got the idea from a quote from a chigong/tai chi master: "In motion, you are like the angry tiger / In quietness you are like the hibernating dragon". My intention was to comment a bit on the nature of anger and of my own nature (and my own angry temper).

Karma: Thank you for the rating!

( Posted by: Eldros [Member] On: March 1, 2009 )





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